Goodbye 2023!

2023 was a really terrible year. On the list of terrible things we have major knee surgery, another novel failing to get a book deal, a really upsetting reading slump, Neutron making it clear he’s about ready to retire, my mom being diagnosed with brain cancer, and more. It’s been a rough time, and I can’t wait for 2024 to start and hopefully move in a more positive direction.

But there were some good things that happened in 2023, and I’d like to focus on those right now.

I have a wonderful, supportive group of friends and writing buddies who I honestly could not have gotten through this year without. And this year I really strengthened and developed my friendships with some of my coworkers. I feel like I have an army around me holding me up, and I couldn’t be more happy to have all of them in my life.

I also successfully branded myself as the person in the office with all the space clothes, and I’ve got even more coming for 2024! A silly thing but a good thing. Everyone should have galaxy dresses.

My job has been fabulous about letting me telework from home, so I’ve been able to spend so much more time with my mom than I would have otherwise. We have had so many small adventures in the last few months and built so many precious memories.

I wrote a new book this year. It was a deeply personal book about the first time a friendship ends, but it’s also about prejudice and inclusivity, and I’ve thrown in some vampires, selkies, weerebears, and dragons for fun. The draft needs a lot of work, and I’m currently revising to add more actual plot to balance out all the feelings, but I’ve grown a lot as a writer because of this project, and I think I’ll be really proud of this book in the end. If I ever finish it.

I also started writing another book this fall, which I’m calling my destress project and which has done wonders for my mental health and my love of writing. I’ll have a lot more to say about this in 2024.

And I had two short stories published in 2023, which I completely forgot about in my first draft of this post! “Duet for a Soloist” was published in Electric Spec, and “Where No One Sleeps” was published in Andromeda Spaceways. I’m really proud of both of these stories and so glad I got to share them with you this year!

Despite the reading slump, I also read a total of forty-five books this year. Twenty of them were new books, and twenty-five were rereads. Here are my favorites:

  • The Bartimaeus Trilogy by Jonathan Stroud
  • Bloodmarked by Tracy Deonn
  • Before and After the Book Deal by Courtney Maum
  • Save the Cat! Writes a Young Adult Novel: The Ultimate Guide to Writing a YA Bestseller by Jessica Brody
  • Don’t Want to be Your Monster by Deke Moulton
  • The Thing About Jellyfish by Ali Benjamin
  • Chewing the Fat: An Oral History of Italian Foodways From Fascism to Dolce Vita by Karima Moyer-Nocchi
  • The Chalice of the Gods by Rick Riordan

I have added these books to my book recs page, and I will have more detailed thoughts about them soon, I hope!

As for what’s coming next in 2024? I don’t know, and I’m not going to set any goals for myself right now. I have plans for my blog and books and short stories I want to write, but I’m just going to keep doing my best with everything.

So happy New Year! Here’s to a 2024 full of light and love and words!

The New Magical School

Magical school stories have been around for a long, long time. They didn’t start with Harry Potter (Tamora Pierce’s Circle of Magic books and Diane Duane’s Young Wizards both come to mind), and they certainly didn’t end there either (Percy Jackson, Children of the Red King, all the books I’m going to talk about today, and so so many more). . I think these books are so popular because school and the experiences we have at school can be so universal, so what better way to connect with kids and explore the possibility of a magical world. In the last few years, I have read a number of new magical school books and absolutely loved them, and since I hope to write a magical school story of my own someday, I thought it might be fun to pick apart what all these books are doing that’s similar to each other and what each is doing that is unique. So buckle up. This post is going to get long, but hopefully fun.

First, I want to note that I will be talking about Harry Potter in this post. I absolutely do not condone J. K. Rowling’s bigotry, but it would be weird to write a whole post about magical school stories without mentioning Harry Potter and the impact its had on the subgenre. It’s also such a huge cultural touchstone, even now. You might not have read any of the new books I’m talking about today, but odds are you know something about Harry Potter. So I’m not going to dwell, but I am going to talk about it. Onward!

When I say a magical school book, I mean a book where the main character receives a magical education. Many of these books involve the main character discovering a magical world hidden within their own everyday world. Many of these books also involve the main character leaving home to receive their magical education. There are books where the main character already knows or is already part of the magical world in some way before beginning their magical education, and there are also books where the main character doesn’t leave home. In the Children of the Red King series, Charlie Bone knows of the existence of the magical powers that some people have (including his formidable grandmother and great-aunts), and when Charlie goes off to Bloor’s Academy to begin his magical education, he still goes home on the weekends. In The Marvellers, Ella is already well aware of Marveller society and can’t wait to attend the Arcanum Training Institute, and in Witchlings, Seven never leaves home because her education and adventures occur right in her community. Finally, sometimes magical education books don’t take place during the school year but instead during summer camps (Percy Jackson and Amari and the Night Brothers both are primarily set during summer camps where the kids receive their magical education).

Now that we’ve talked about what a magical school book generally is, let’s talk about the five magical school books I’ve lined up for this post.

Nevermoor: The Trials of Morrigan Crow by Jessica Townsend: Morrigan is a cursed child, destined to bring bad luck and misfortune to everyone she comes into contact with and then to die on the last night of the age. Except then an eccentric redhaired man named Jupiter North appears, mere moments before her death, and proposes an alternative: Morrigan can live. She can live and try out to enter the Wundrous Society in the city of Nevermoor. Morrigan has never heard of Nevermoor or the Wundrous Society, but she doesn’t want to die. So she goes with Jupiter, narrowly escaping her own death and entering the fantastical world of Nevermoor, where she’ll befriend giant talking cats and dragon riders, leap off hotel roofs with only an umbrella to break her fall, and face a series of challenging and terrifying trials to join the Wundrous Society. If Morrigan makes it into the Wundrous Society, she’ll have a place where she belongs, a real family, for the first time in her whole life. If she fails the trials, she’ll have to return to her parents’ home, where the death of a cursed child lies in wait for her.

There’s so much more good stuff in this book, and I don’t want to spoil it, but this series has rapidly risen to be one of my all time favorites. I love the unique, intricate, and incredibly fantastical world building. I love all the characters, who are so vivid. I love the heart in this book. I have been dying for the fourth book for months, and I still have months to go. If you haven’t read the Nevermoor books yet, you really have to.

Amari and the Night Brothers by B. B. Alston: Amari’s older brother is missing, and no one will do anything about it. The police insist he must have been into something illegal, but Amari is certain there’s more to it. Then hse finds a ticking briefcase in her brother’s room addressed to her. Amari’s brother has nominated her to join the secret Bureau of Supernatural Affairs. Amari is certain this bureau has something to do with his disappearance, but to dig deeper into what h appened to her brother, Amari will have to pass three trials to be accepted into the bureau. She has a lot to learn: mermaids, yettis, dwarves, and magicians are all real and the labyrinthine layout and methods of the Bureau of Supernatural Affairs for starters. It doesn’t help that Amari is competing with wealthy kids who have known about the supernatural world their entire lives to get into the Bureau and discover its secrets. To make matters worse, everyone has a talent that is enhanced to a supernatural ability, and it turns out that Amari’s talent is illegal in the supernatural world.

I adore Amari’s voice in this book, and the deeply personal struggle she faces. The world is also really fun, and Amari makes so many great friends. The second book is just as fantastic, and I can’t wait for the third book to come out.The themes of class and racial inequality the book explores are also really important and well-done. This is another series that I wholeheartedly recommend.

The Mystwick School of Musicraft by Jessica Khoury: Musical magic is one of my great loves, right up there with found family and outer space and books about books. So I was really excited about Mystwick before I even picked it up, and it really was a great read. Amelia Jones has always dreamed of attending Mystwick, where she can learn to use her flute to create music like the mother she can’t remember. Her audition goes horrificly wrong, but a mixup with some forms lands Amelia at Mystwick, and they agree to let her stay on a trial basis. As Amelia struggles to keep up with her more advanced classmates, prepares for the audition that will decide if she can stay at Mystwick, makes friends, and contends with a ghost that seems determined to get her kicked out of school, a magical storm is brewing that not even the powerful musician instructors at the school can stop. But maybe Amelia can.

I listened to the audiobook edition, which I highly recommend, because it actually included the music the students were playing, which really added to the experience in my opinion. But amazing audio edition aside, I really enjoyed this book. I had some issues with the way the school was run and the way lessons were taught and such, but on the whole, the book was just full of so much heart. I laughed, I cried, I got the sequel the minute it came out and then life happened and I haven’t read it yet but I can’t wait.

The Marvellers by Dhonielle Clayton: The Arcanum Training Institute is a magical training school in the sky, but until now conjurors have never been allowed to attend, because their magic is seen as dangerous and unnatural. But a new law has changed all that, and Ella Durand is going to be the first conjuror to attend the ATI. She’s eager to make a good first impression, make new friends, and learn new magic, but it’s hard to be the first, and most kids and even teachers don’t really trust Ella. She’s finally starting to make friends when a notorious criminal escapes from prison, supposedly with conjuror help, and Ella’s favorite teacher goes missing, and everyone thinks Ella is to blame.

It took me a bit to get into this book, but once I did, it was really phenomenal. The magical school was so diverse and fun. I loved all the characters. I loved the little epigraphs at the beginning of each chapter which really added to the story, and getting the point of view of the villain was super creepy. I really felt like I was piecing the mystery together along with Ella. My one big hangup with this book was that I would definitely not recommend the audiobook. I had a lot of trouble with the narrator, which is very rare for me. But on the whole, this was really great, and I’m super excited for the next book in the series to come out.

Witchlings by Claribel A. Ortega: Seven is a witchling who can’t wait to be placed in the most powerful coven of Ravenskill along with her best friend and come into their power as full-fledged witches together. Seven’s friend gets their wish, but Seven is not chosen. In front of the whole town, Seven isn’t placed in any of the five covens: She’s a spare. Spare covens have fewer witches and are less powerful, and so the town generally looks down on them. Worse, Seven and the other two spares fail to seal their coven, meaning they won’t ever become full witches. Seven invokes their only option: the impossible task. Now, Seven and her two new coven sisters need to hunt down a monster that’s been terrorizing Ravenskill. If they succeed, their coven will be sealed and they’ll come into their full powers as witches. If they fail…well…the last spare coven to try an impossible task got turned into toads. Permanently.

This book was so fun. It has a really exciting adventure, but it also has really important themes about friendship and how not everything is as it seems. I love that this is a book that takes place in Seven’s hometown. Seven and her friends never leave home, and their families and the other adults in the town play a big role in the story. The fact that the kids stay home reminded me of So You Want to Be a Wizard by Diane Duane, which I also really enjoyed. It’s different from the other books I’m talking about in this post because the kids don’t go off to school or summer camp, but they’re still training to use their magic, so it made sense to include it. This is another one where I’m really excited to read the sequel.

These five are by no means the only magical school books to come out in the last few years, but these are the ones I’ve read and enjoyed and feel most qualified to talk about. And there’s lots to talk about here. (Honestly there might be too much to talk about!) I’m fascinated by the elements that all these books have in common both with each other and with older magical school books. There are also some interesting new trends I’ve noticed among these books that weren’t always present in older magical school books. And finally, each of these books brings a unique twist of their own to the magical school story.

The sorting: Every book seems to have some manner of dividing the students. This is an aspect of the magical school story that seems pretty evergreen to me. In Harry Potter, the kids were divided into houses based on their personalities. In the Charlie Bone books, the students were in music, art, or theater sections of the school, though that had little to do with the plot. In Percy Jackson, the demigods are sorted based on who their godly parent is. While the sorting continues in current books, I’ve noticed it generally has more to do with the characters’ talents and interests rather than their personality traits (Witchlings may be the exception to this). This focus on grouping characters based on their type of magic is I think partly because in a lot of these new books, everyone has different magic and everyone is learning their own magic, rather than everyone learning the same skills as in some of the older books. Nevertheless, there’s a big emphasis on sorting characters. In Amari, it’s about what talent everyone has and then which department they choose to join in the Bureau of Supernatural Affairs. In Mystwick, the musicians are sorted, quite naturally, into sections. In the first Nevermoor book, there’s a huge emphasis on what knacks everyon has, particularly because Morrigan doesn’t know what hers is, and in the later books, we get the different schools within the Wundrous Society. The kids in The Marvellers are sorted into paragons of the five senses based on their individual marvel. Another interesting difference I’ve noticed is that in a couple of these books, the sorting does not occur right at the beginning of school. In both Nevermoor and Amari, the kids need to try out and be placed where they belong, and in The Marvellers the kids spend the whole school year learning how to harness their marvels and aboutall the different kinds of marvels before they discover exactly what kind of power they have.

Why has the sorting of students into different groups persisted when so many other aspects of the magical school story have changed? I think partly because in middle school, when a lot of these stories take place, kids are naturally beginning to sort themselves based on their interests and activities and making friends within those interests and activities, so this is a way of representing that. Some middle schools also group kids together so they all have classes with the same set of core teachers—my middle school called them clusters—so the sorting feels like a natural part of the school experience, made magical like everything else in the magical school story. Finally, I think it’s just plain fun. Before 2020, how many of us tied our Hogwarts house to our identity? I can just picture kids today talking about what knack or supernatural talent of marvel they would have if they could go to Nevermoor or the Bureau of Supernatural Affairs or the Arcanum Training Institute.

The special main character, with a twist: In older magical school books, the protagonist is so often special in some way, a child of prophecy or famous or well-connected. They come to school with advantages, even if they don’t want those advantages. They are well-regarded because of who they are as a symbol in the world. You get the gist. The characters in newer books are different from their peers too, but at least initially, it’s rarely in a good way. Morrigan Crow has no idea what her knack is, and if she doesn’t figure it out, she’ll be sent back home, where her death awaits. Amari is not only an outsider, poorer than the other trainees she’s competing against, and one of the only people of color, but her supernatural talent is also illegal. Amelia Jones didn’t really get into the Mystwick School of Musicraft, and the only reason she’s here is because she has the same name as a girl who died after the magical acceptance letters were sent out. Ella is the first conjuror to attend the ATI and has to face all the prejudices the Marvellers have against her and her magic. And Seven is a spare witch, so she might never come into her full powers and is generally despised by the townspeople she’s grown up with.

It makes perfect sense that the protagonist of these kinds of stories is going to be special in some way. A story about an “ordinary” kid going to magical school, learning magic and doing homework and making friends and having all the regular trials and tribulations of middle school wouldn’t be super interesting for very long, because it wouldn’t have a story. There wouldn’t be a prophecy or a mystery or an adventure or whatever that forms the backbone of these stories to draw us in. But I’m really interested in this turn that seems to have happened from older books, where the specialness of the main character was generally positive, to the books coming out in the last few years, where the main character is generally special in a negative way, at least at the start of the book. I think part of the reason this is happening is because a protagonist who comes into a situation as an underdog is someone we the readers are going to feel for and get behind naturally. So now we have a character we feel for and a compelling story that we can relate to—going to school, even to learn magic—and then we’re able to get a compelling conflict that our not-so-special main character will need to deal with. The special-in-a-bad-way protagonist is also a great way to illustrate the impact of unjust authority figures, which many of these books do quite well, which unfortunately is pretty relevant to the real world these days, so these stories can be pretty impactful in that regard as well.

The actually supportive adults: Not a ton to say here. With the exception of Mystwick, there are good adults all over the place in these books. And they aren’t just good adults. They’re supportive adults. They’re helpful adults. I love to see middle grade stories where the adults in the main character’s life aren’t dead or absent or oblivious but are instead involved in the adventure in a way that still gives the main character agency in the story. This isn’t to say that all magical school books in the past wer full of negligent adults. Charlie Bone could rely on his uncle, for example. But there are some adults who absolutely should have stepped in sooner (I’m looking at you, Dumbledore). And on the whole I think this emphasis on good adults is a really positive change. We have to remember that the main audience for these books is children, and by including adults the main characters can rely on to actually help and support them, your presenting a very different image to the intended readers of these books—children—then you would be if all the adults are useless or absent.

The diversity: There’s been a big push for more diverse books in the last few years, and these books are exemplifying that. BothMystwick and The Marvellers feature magical schools that take students from all over the world, and the protagonists of both Amari and Witchlings are people of color. Nevermoor is set in a secondary fantasy world, but still has a diverse cast of characters and deals with themes of difference and equality and respect, particularly in the third book. I’m not at all going to claim that all of these books are paragons of diversity. I think some of them are stellar and some of them could potentially do more. But compared to some older books that shall not be named where diversity went only as far as a very stereotypical made-up name, these books are a huge step in the right direction.

The fantastical world building: I’m not here to criticize the worlds of older magical school books. If you want that kind of discourse, it’s all over Twitter. But let’s be honest, the world building in these new books just blows the old ones out of the water. Magical schools in the sky? Public transit where you hook your umbrella onto a moving platform and just hang on for dear life? All the different kinds of magic you can create with a musical instrument? All the creatures from diverse myths and legends and the magic and technology we use to deal with them? All the creatures who are completely original to this world (I love you Fenestra the Magnificat!)? Need I say more? It’s just so good! I love it all!

But seriously, if you do look at some of those angry Twitter threads, I think there’s a lot of feeling that world building in older magical school books isn’t as creative or original. A lot of it comes from old myths and folklore, and there’s nothing wrong with that, but I think there’s a lot of eagerness for that extra twist of creativity in the worlds of these magical schools. I could be totally wrong here, but whatever the reason, this is a trend I can get behind, because it makes these books so much fun. I’ve also noticed that the world building is one of the main places where these books really demonstrate their uniqueness. Each one has its own take on the magical school and the world that school resides in. And like I said, I love it all!

The pacing: This is more something I’m interested in keeping an eye on than something I have a coherent thought or theory on at the moment. I’ve only read the first book in three of these series, and I don’t know how long those series are going to be. I’m caught up on Nevermoor, and I know Jessica Townsend is hoping it will be a nine-book series. I’m also caught up on Amari, and I’m pretty sure that’s going to be a trilogy, based on the way the plot has escalated in the first two books, but I’m not positive. All that being said, I’m thinking about the overarching plot of these series, when it is introduced, and how it progresses. I have a feeling that we’re getting the overarching plot sooner in magical school books and that it is more present in the early books in the series than the overarching plot in older series. I think that’s definitely true in the Nevermoor books so far, and I’d argue also for Amari, but I’m pretty sure that’s a shorter series so I would expect the level of overarching plot to be exactly what we’re getting. I think we got a fair amount of overarching series plot in The Marvellers, but without knowing what’s coming, I can’t say much more on that. And honestly I could only make guesses at what the overarching plot is in Witchlings and Mystwick, which isn’t a problem, just an observation. So really, I don’t have enough information to make any actual guesses on this theory, and it might turn out that I’m totally wrong. It will certainly be interesting to see though.

So what does all this mean if you want to write a magical school book? I hesitate to call anything I’ve talked about a trend in publishing or a trend in magical school books, because I’ve only talked about five book series here. But to the extent that the patterns I’ve discussed here are trends, like all trends, you shouldn’t necessarily write your book to fit that trend. If all this contemplating magical school books has illustrated anything to me, it’s that genres and subgenres change over time, and you need to read widely in your genre so you know what has been done before and what has not, as well as what the industry may have moved on from. But as always, you need to write the book you want to write, the story you feel in your heart and bones that you have to tell, because otherwise, you won’t love it. And if you don’t love it, your readers won’t love it either.

There’s almost certainly more to discuss here, but I’m going to bring this English essay (I mean blog post) to an end before it becomes even more ridiculously long. I’m really looking forward to seeing how all these series develop and reading more new magical school books to see if my thoughts hold up with a broader pool of books. If you’ve read any magical school books that have come out recently and I didn’t discuss here, I would love to hear about them. If you have read these books, I would also love to know what you thought of them and whether you agree with my analysis.

Until next time! Happy reading and writing!

January 2023 Update

Hello friends! I can’t believe we’re already at the end of January. It feels like this month has flown by, and also like it has moved incredibly slowly. In other words, it feels like it’s January.

I know one of my goals for 2023 was to post more on my blog (a perennial theme at this point), but my January was packed and stressful, so I’m letting myself off the hook for this month. I do have a whole list of things I want to write about, so stay tuned.

So what happened in January?

I had knee surgery.

Turns out knee surgery is a pretty big deal.

I spent the first half of January in a muddle of really bad pre-surgery anxiety. That comes with the territory when you’ve had fifteen eye operations as a kid. But everyone at the hospital was really fabulous at making sure I was calm and comfortable, and the surgery went well.

Then I spent the second half of January in a muddle of recovering. It’s been a lot, and it hasn’t been without hiccups. My stomach objected to the whole enterprise, forcefully and in just about every way a stomach could object. Then I had something that was possibly a blood clot. But I’m improving every day. I started using crutches a week after surgery, and now, two weeks after surgery, I’m down to one crutch and I’ve started physical therapy. Basically, I’m mobile enough to be very frustrated with how far I still have to go. I hope to be back on a bike this summer, but I’d also happily settle for being rid of this giant brace on my leg and being able to walk around without pain and without my kneecap dislocating. I do want to give a huge shout-out to all the family and friends who have stayed with me, taken care of me and my Neutron boy, sent cookies, and just dropped by to hang out and cheer me up.

With all this going on, most of my other regular pursuits have fallen a bit by the wayside. I only read three books in January, partly because I’m busy and partly because I’m still in a reading slump, though I think I might be coming out of it. My favorite book of January was THE AMULET OF SAMARKAND, the first book in Jonathan Stroud’s BARTIMAEUS TRILOGY. It had both a really compelling and humorous voice and really well done tension. I’m halfway through the second book and enjoying that quite a lot too. Perhaps I will write a blog post about the whole series when I’ve finished.

I also really enjoyed THE MARVELLERS by Dhonielle Clayton. This was a really fun, creative, and diverse take on the traditional magical school story, and I’d definitely recommend everyone check it out—though full disclosure, I did struggle with the audiobook narrator for this one, and I usually don’t have problems with audiobook narrators. I’ve been reading a lot of magical school stories in the last few months, so I’m thinking I might do a post on what those stories look like these days.

After a few weeks without much progress on my own work, I am writing again, slowly but surely. This is also helping to improve my mood immensely. I’m one of those authors who gets very cranky when I don’t write for more than a few days. I’ve decided that my writing goal for 2023 is to finish the two manuscripts I’m working on. If I have time, I have a stretch goal of going to look back at one of my older projects and do some work toward reimagining it and/or disecting it for parts, but that’s definitely a stretch goal. Otherwise, I’ve been brainstorming some ideas for fun writing posts for this blog.

Oh, one more thing. I received two short story acceptances in January. The contracts aren’t all signed, sealed, and delivered yet, so I can’t share more details, but watch this spot! I’m really excited for you to read both of these little tales.

More soon! I hope your 2023 is off to a good start and you have a happy February!

My Favorite Books of 2022

Hello friends! I know I haven’t been posting a lot this year, and I promise I have lots of plans for new posts in 2023, but in the meantime, here I am, rolling back in with my annual list of favorite reads.

My reading goal for 2022 was different from my reading goals in the past. In previous years, I’ve made goals to read a specific number of books, usually around 100, with no preference to new rereads or rereads. In 2022, I set a goal to read 50 books that I haven’t read before.

I read 67 new books in 2022. I also reread 18 books, for a grand total of 85 books in 2022. It’s not as many books as I’ve read in past years, but 2022 was also quite a year (more on that in a future post).

The books I read mainly fell into three genres this year: fantasy, with a big emphasis on middle grade fantasy; historical fiction focused on WWII; and historical nonfiction focused on WWII. I was trying to refresh my research to venture back into rewriting my college honors thesis into a historical fantasy novel set in WWII Italy. I did get pretty far into that revision before turning to something else, because WWII is really depressing friends, and there was enough bad stuff happening in the world this summer and fall that I needed a minute. But this project really drove what I read this year.

So without further ado, I give you my favorite books of 2022

The Bone Shard Emperor by Andrea Stewart: epic fantasy; a gripping sequel to The Bone Shard Daughter, which I read at the end of 2021.

Redemptor by Jordan Ifueko: another epic fantasy; also another sequel; a fabulous conclusion to the Raybearer duology.

Night Owl by Sarah Mlynowski, Emily Jenkins, and Lauren Myracle: a heartfelt conclusion to the Upside-Down Magic series.

Sal and Gabi Break the Universe and Sal and Gabi Fix the Universe by Carlos Hernandezz: a middle grade sci fi duology full of so much humor and heart. I just adored these books!

The Night Crossing by Karen Ackerman and The Butterfly by Patricia Polacco: I’m putting these two together because they were the first historical fiction books I ever read about WWII. I was glad to discover they held up all these years later, and it was fascinating to revisit books I’d read so long ago and see what I remembered and what I was surprised by all over again. (And before you say anything, I’m not counting books I read more than twenty years ago and haven’t seen since as rereads).

The Problim Children by Natalie Lloyd: another fun middle grade adventure/fantasy novel. I was so impressed with how Natalie Lloyd handles such a large cast with such finesse. I can’t wait to read the next book in this series.

Across the Greengrass Fields and Where the Drowned Girls Go by Seanan McGuire: The next two installments of the fantasy Wayward Children series I started in 2021. These books are about what happens to children who have adventures in other worlds after they come home, and I was really intrigued and excited by the turn in the series these books took. Looking forwart to the next one, which should be out in early 2023.

We Must Not Forget: Holocaust Stories of Survival and Resistance and We Had to Be Brave: Escaping the Nazis on the Kindertransport by Deborah Hopkinson: both of these books should be required reading. They tell the true stories of young people living through, escaping, and resisting the Holocaust, in their own words. Nothing I can say here can express the power of these too books.

All the Frequent Troubles of Our Days: The True Story of the American Woman At the Heart of the German Resistance to Hitler by Rebecca Donner: in this nonfiction book about WWII, the author tells the story of her great aunt who worked in the heart of the German resistance. Definitely worth a read.

One Jar of Magic by Corey Ann Haydu: a heartwarming middle grade fantasy about struggling to meet parental expectations, escaping abuse, and finding your own family and your own magic. Loved this!

All the Impossible Things by Lindsay Lackey: a middle grade fantasy that combines so many of my favorite things. There’s found family and discovering your own quiet magic.

The Firebird Song by Arnee Flores: a beautiful middle grade fantasy quest about what it costs to save the world and what true friendship means.

A Place to Hang the Moon by Kate Albus: A historical fiction middle grade set in WWIIabout three orphans with no relatives and a large inheritance who are sent into the English countryside fleeing the Blitz and also in the hopes of finding a family who will adopt them. This was another book that touched my heart.

The War that Saved My Life and The War I Finally Won by Kimberly Brubaker Bradley: a middle grade historical fiction duology about a disabled girl fleeing the Blitz and her abusive mother and discovering independence and freedom, safety and family, and horses.

Lisa’s War by Carol Matas: Another middle grade WWII historical fiction, about a gJewish girl in Denmark joining the resistance against the Nazis. This one was really powerful.

The Boy on the Wooden Box by Leon Leyson: The true story of the youngest person Oscar Schindler saved from the Holocaust. This one made me cry so much. So moving.

The Librarian of Auschwitz by Antonio Iturbe: This book was absolutely incredible. It’s a novelization of the true story of a school on the children’s block in Auschwitz, and the illicit library run in that school. It is an emotional, heart wrenching story, and I think absolutely everyone should read it.

Between Shades of Gray and Salt to the Sea by Ruta Sepetys:These two historical fiction novels are related standalones. I loved them because they dealt with areas of WWII history I didn’t know anything about. The writing is also stellar. Highly recommend both these books, and I’ll definitely checking out this author’s other work.

Code Name Verity by Elizabeth Wein: I’m late to the party on this one, but this book was absolutely breathtaking! If you haven’t read it, you must.

Witchlings by Claribel A. Ortega: A delightful middle grade fantasy adventure about discovering magic and friendship and defeating some very bad bad guys. Really looking forward to the second book.

The Golden Enclaves by Naomi Novik: Naomi Novik’s Scholomance series has been getting better and better with each book, and this finale made the whole series just incredible. It definitely was everything I wanted and more.

Amari and the Great Game by B. B. Alston: A delightful sequel to Amari and the Night Brothers, which I read and loved in 2021. And OMG that ending! When does the next book come out?

If you’ve read any of these books, I’d love to talk about them with you. And if you decide to pick any of these up in 2023, let me know. Finally, if you have any recommendations for books you simply couldn’t put down, books that grabbed you and wouldn’t let you go from beginning to end, please give them to me.

I hope everyone had a wonderful year of books in 2022 and I wish you all even more great reads in 2023!

January and February Update

Hello friends, and happy spring. Warm weather seems to have finally arrived in the D.C. area after a winter which was long and cold, and then not cold, and then cold again. The last couple months in particular, where we’ve swung from almost summery conditions back to the depths of winter weather have been a bit rough. But the warm weather has arrived, and the Covid numbers are a bit better, at least for now, so I’ve been tentatively stepping out of my apartment again to see friends and go to in-person barre classes (the barre requires vaccinations, and I’m testing before seeing friends).

January and February were pretty hectic months, which is why I haven’t posted recently. I moved to a bigger apartment at the end of January. I was just moving to a new apartment in the same building, so it wasn’t the hardest move I’ve ever done, but most of the month was still taken up with packing and getting through the administrative work of moving. And then I’ve been unpacking and organizing my new space throughout February. It’s been a lot of work, but I have a den now that I’ve set up as my cozy writing space, and the rest of my apartment is bigger too, so it’s overall a lot more comfortable. I also have more windows, so it’s even sunnier than my old apartment, which was an unexpected bonus.

I had so much going on in January and February that I hit a bit of a reading slump, which for me means I read about six books each month, for a total of twelve books by the end of February (I’m not exactly sure how much I read each month). Eight of the books I read were new, and four were rereads. I know this still sounds like a lot of books for two months, but I also didn’t really enjoy many of them until the end of February. A lot of them were fine, but not as special as I wanted them to be.

Of course, there were a few standouts. First was The Bone Shard Emperor by Andrea Stewart, sequel to The Bone Shard Daughter. This series, The Drowning Empire, is so rich and creative, and I adore the characters. It follows a number of very different people, the emperor’s daughter, a wanted smuggler, a woman with amnesia (best description I have), the daughter of an island governor, and a resistance leader. There’s also strange and wonderful and terrifying magic. I’m being vague because first, it’s hard to describe, but second, it’s such a joy to discover and I don’t want to spoil it. If you haven’t read it, I highly recommend, and if you have, I would love to talk about it.

The second book that really stood out to me was Sal and Gabi Break the Universe by Carlos Hernandez. This book is about Sal and Gabi, two seventh graders at a school for the arts in Miami who, well, break the universe. Literally, Sal can create wormholes, and he keeps accidentally reaching into alternate universes to, say, put raw chickens in bullies’ lockers, and to bring alternate versions of his dead mother back into his universe. Everything about this book was just so vibrant and fun and loving, and it gave me so many feelings. This is another one you simply must read!

While I didn’t feel like I got a lot of reading done in the last couple months, I did get a lot of writing done. At the beginning of December, I gave my middle grade fantasy book to a set of totally new beta readers, and I got their feedback at the end of January. It was all super useful and really helped me crystallize what the problems were with the project. I have since taken all their comments, broken it down into categories, come up with solutions to the problems identified, created a revision outline, and started revising. These haven’t been easy revisions: I’ve rewritten my opening, cut a number of characters, reordered a number of plot events to streamline the events and fix pacing issues, added some new stuff to fill in some missing pieces, and I still have to rework my climax and ending. But I’m so far really happy with what I’ve done, and hopefully I’ll wind up with an even stronger book.

Otherwise, work has been busier than ever. I’m being given a lot more responsibilities, and I’m really enjoying it. It’s hard to believe I’ve been at this job for two and a half years, and two of them have been during the pandemic. I’m definitely looking forward to getting back into the office and getting to know my coworkers again, but at least with the bigger apartment, I’m enjoying teleworking more. Who’d have thought extra space would help that.

I hope everyone’s keeping well. I’m planning to post again soon with some thoughts on researching historical fiction, assuming, of course, that I can wrangle those thoughts into something coherent. In the meantime, enjoy the start of spring.

Favorite Books of 2021

It’s that time of year again: time to look back on all the books I read in 2021 and try to pick some favorites. Actually, it’s past time, because somehow it’s already February, but what is time now, right?

Last year, I had a goal to read 100 books in 2021. I read 113. And I’ve narrowed it down to 20 favorite books and series and a few honorable mentions. I was actually surprised by the variety of my favorites this year. While there were plenty of series, or installments in series, there were a number of stand-alone books, in all genres, including contemporary and nonfiction. Let’s dive in!

The Invisible Life of Addie LaRue by V. E. Schwab. A beautifully lyrical and haunting stand-alone historical fantasy novel about a young French woman who makes a bargain with a demon to live forever so she can see the world, rather than be trapped in the marriage her parents have arranged for her, but at a terrible price. She will live forever, but no one will remember her. The writing in this book was spectacular, and I was very impressed with how this much book covered so much time and space and still tell such a powerful and gripping story. I finished this book right at the beginning of 2021, maybe on New Year’s Day, but it has stayed with me. Definitely recommend.

Save the Cat! Writes a Novel by Jessica Brody. My writing improved so much in 2021. Normally I can’t pinpoint a specific timeframe or even a specific piece of advice that helped me, but this year, I can see that my writing improved by leaps, and I can absolutely credit this book, which my agent recommended to me. Save the Cat! Writes a Novel goes through the three-act structure of a novel in fifteen beats, including examples and how much space they should be taking up in the novel. I’ve certainly heard all of this advice before, but this book laid it out so clearly, with a ton of helpful examples, and this made it clear to me in a way it hasn’t been made clear before. I definitely recommend this book for anyone interested in learning how to structure a story.

The Murderbot Diaries series by Martha Wells. Five novellas and a full-length novel about a security robot who has hacked its controls so it can enjoy soap operas, but the humans its supposed to be protecting keep getting into trouble and it has to deal with them, and then it has to have feelings. It’s a pretty grim world, but the characters are great, and there’s just something warm and fuzzy and so relatable about Murderbot’s desire to just consume media and nope out of everything else that went very well with our first pandemic winter. And then I was so excited when the novel, Network Effect, and the whole series, won Hugos this year! Absolutely love Murderbot!

Upside-Down Magic books 6 and 7 by Sarah Mlynowski, Emily Jenkins, and Lauren Myracle. This series continues to be a lot of fun and very cute. Still waiting for the next book, because book 7 ended on a bit of a cliffhanger.

A Libertarian Walks Into a Bear: The Eutopian Plot to Liberate an American Town and Some Bears by Matthew Hongoltz-Hetling. I don’t read a ton of nonfiction, and even when I do, it has to be really special to make it onto my favorites list. But this one was both. It managed to be absolutely hilarious, even as it followed a bunch of libertarians on their quest to create a libertarian utopian town in New Hampshire, not too far from where I grew up actually. The libertarians’ story takes us through the decay of this town and, well, right into some bears. It was a very interesting and informative read, but most importantly I was laughing all the way, which was just what I needed.

Hollowpox: the Hunt for Morrigan Crow by Jessica Townsend. I probably read this book four times in 2021, so need I say more? Actually, I do, because I need to warn you that this is a plague book, but it was actually kind of cathartic to read. I loved spending more time in Nevermoor with Morrigan and her friends, and oh my gosh that ending!

The House in the Cerulean Sea by T. J. Klune. A cozy fantasy about found family and doing what’s right. Another warm fuzzy read.

Crownchasers by Rebecca Coffindaffer. A high-stakes, action-packed sci fi about a race to find the crown seal to become the next ruler of the space empire—and also to stop the bad guy from winning. Lots of fun. I have the sequel and can’t wait to read it.

Legendborn by Tracy Deonn. The descendants of Arthur and his Knights of the Round Table have a secret society at the University of North Carolina, and a black girl infiltrates them pretending to be a new pledge in order to find out what happened the night her mother died. There’s a lot more too it than that, and it really is a fabulous book at grief and friendship and history and racism, all woven together into a really touching story with a real gut punch of an ending. Can’t wait for the sequel to come out.

The Galaxy, and the Ground Within by Becky Chambers. A nice soft conclusion to the Wayfarers series. Are you noticing a theme to my favorite books this year because I am? This wasn’t my favorite of the series, but it was very nice and definitely recommend this book and the whole series.

Amari and the Night Brothers by B. B. Alston. A fun middle grade about a girl, Amari, who follows a secret message left by her missing brother to join a secret government agency that deals with the supernatural, but Amari isn’t just any girl, and she has to use all her smarts and her own new powers to find her brother and foil a dastardly scheme. This was a ton of fun and I am very excited for the next book.

The Mysterious Benedict Society series by Trenton Lee Stewart. A bunch of clever orphans are teamed up to help save the world from an evildoer with a nefarious plan. Reminded me a lot of A Series of Unfortunate Events, except the childrens’ guardians were generally good responsible people. Or as responsible as we get in middle grade. I will say I prefer the first three and didn’t like the fourth nearly as much, and you can certainly stop after the third book, but the fourth was still good fun.

Lady Astronaut series by Mary Robinette Kowal. What if an asteroid struck Earth in 1952, setting off an instinction-level climate crisis and fundamentally altering the space race? Elma York is a former WWII wasp pilot now working as a computer at the new International Aerospace something that starts with C, and she’s trying to convince the higher ups to start training female astronauts. If humanity is going to survive, they have to colonize the moon and Mars, so women will have to be astronauts at some point. I flew through these books and loved them very much. Have I mentioned that alternate history space race fiction is like absolutely my speed? I’ve also been watching For All Mankind on Apple TV and really enjoying it.

Eliza and her Monsters by Francesca Zappia. A really wonderful contemporary YA. A shy girl who doesn’t fit in at high school but secretly writes and illustrates an insanely popular web comic meets a new boy at school who turns out to be one of the top fans of her comic. They become friends and bond over the comic, but Eliza is too scared to tell him she’s the writer, just a fellow fan. But this book goes so much deeper, dealing with mental illness and social isolation and of course the power of friendship. I wasn’t expecting how much I loved this book, but it kept me up reading all night. Definitely worth a read.

Elatsoe by Darcie Little Badger. A delightful YA about a Lipan Apache girl who can raise the ghosts of dead animals. She sets out with her ghost dog and her best friend to solve her cousin’s murder. Loved so much about this, including how her parents were onboard and even participated in the adventures, how there was no romantic subplot (Elatsoe is asexual), and of course ghost dog. Read this because it was nominated for a Hugo Award and absolutely adored every minute.

A Wizard’s Guide to Defensive Baking by T. Kingfisher. I didn’t realize until after I read this that T. Kingfisher is also Ursula Vernon, author of Castle Hangnail which I’ve read a couple times and deeply love. A Wizard’s Guide to Defensive Baking follows fourteen-year-old Mona, a wizard whose talents like solely in the realm of the bakery, as she encounters then evades an assassin intent on killing all the wizards in the city. Mona finds herself neck-deep in the thick of a plot to overthrow the government, and she, her new friend Spindle, a murderous sourdough starter named Bob, and her trusty gingerbread man riding on her shoulder, set out stop it. This book was exactly my speed, delightful and heartwarming with a pretty horrifying undercurrent. The pacing got a little weird for me in the middle, but overall I loved it and was absolutely delighted it won the Lodestar Award for best YA novel at the Hugos this year. I also want to add that there was one line in this book, in which a bunch of barbarian soldiers were described as hacking up one of Mona’s creations like blind men trying to slice bread, and when I pointed out to T. Kingfisher on Twitter that this line was pretty offensive, she apologized right away, said I was absolutely right, and promised to do better, which was so much more than I was expecting. The experience only made me love this book and the author more. Also have to give T. Kingfisher a shout-out for her excellent acceptance speech: I never knew so many facts about slime mold.

The Illuminae Files series by Amie Kaufman and Jay Kristoff. A fast-paced, utterly gripping YA sci fi series that had me up to all hours of the night unable to put it down. I can’t even describe it. It’s so great. Go read it.

Wayward Children series books 1-5 by Seanan McGuire. I haven’t finished the series, but so far I’m really enjoying it. It’s a bunch of novellas about the adventures of children who have gone into other worlds and then come back and have to live in this one. They’re fairly dark, but there’s also something truly lovely about them.

The Bone Shard Daughter by Andrea Stewart. The first book in an epic fantasy trilogy that I’ve fallen in love with. I didn’t finish the second book until early January, but it’s already top of my favorites for 2022. Set in an empire of floating islands that are sinking and magic wielded by the emperor that sucks the life from the empire’s citizens, a group of very different people are trying to make things better. A smuggler is rescuing children from the tithing festivals where their bone shards are taken to fuel the emperor’s magic, all while trying to track his own missing wife, kidnapped by the emperor seven years ago. The daughter of an island governor and her rebel girlfriend are trying to right her father’s wrongs and help the people of her island. And the daughter of the emperor is trying to learn the magic her father has forbidden her, and along the way uncovering some pretty horrendous truths. The characters and world were so rich and the plot so gripping for this one. I can’t wait for the third one to come out in 2023.

And now for some honorable mentions.

Cemetery Boys by Aiden Thomas. This is a pretty popular book, and I did enjoy it a lot. I loved the world, and I loved loved loved the characters. But the pacing and the plot wasn’t quite right for me.

The Extraordinaries series by T. J. Klune. I loved these books. They were a on of fun, if a bit predicatable. I think T. J. Klune got himself into a bit of a corner by having the main character’s father be a cop who previously assaulted someone he was arresting (the first book came out before the big protests of 2020 really brought policing to the forefront). He was obviously trying to do his best to address the policing issues in the second book, but it came off a bit awkward to me, because other than the policing conflict this is set in an alternate U.S. that bears no resemblance to our reality. But this is definitely a fun series, and whether I recommend it on the whole will really depend on how the third book works for me, so I’m more planning to wait and see on this one.

The Rithmatist by Brandon Sanderson. I love Brandon Sanderson, and was very excited for a magical boarding school with magic based on geometry in an alternate, steampunk America. Unfortunately this book ended on a bit of a cliffhanger, and the main villain remains at large. Also, Brandon Sanderson wrote this a log time ago, like 2013 or 2014, and no sequel has appeared yet. While I loved this book, without a sequel or sequels to finish the story, it was ultimately unsatisfying.

The Scholomance series by Naomi Novik. I just blew through these and really loved them. Two things are keeping me from wholeheartedly recommending them right now. I’ve seen some controversy over some racially insensitive momentsalong with the overall vibe of the first book, and I want to be respectful and not cause additional pain. That being said, I have seen people of color arguing that for the most part, the people saying the first book is racist are taking things out of context, and for the particularly bad moments Naomi Novik has apologized and promised to do better. Moreover, in my opinion (and I’m obviously not a person of color so I don’t feel my opinion has a ton of weight here), the second book really improves in this regard. It feels like Naomi Novik heard the criticism and really listened and really did do better, which is great. My second hesitation is that I just want to see how the third book wraps things up, because it feels like the sort of story where I will either love the ending or loath it.

And that’s it for my favorite books of 2021. My book recs page has been updated to include last year’s favorites, and I’m looking forward to diving into a new year of reading.

I’m doing something a bit different for my reading goal in 2022. I’m only going to track new books I’m reading on Goodreads this year, rather than all the books I read and reread throughout the year. My goal is to read 50 books in 2022 that I have not read before. I will track my rereads in my own personal tracking document. I’m not going to stop myself from rereading my old favorites, because I love to discover new things in my favorite books, never mind that rereading can be incredible stress-relief when the world is being awful again. But I would like to be a bit more intentional about discovering new books too, and I think this structure and this goal will help me accomplish that.

What were your favorite books in 2021? What are your reading goals for 2022?

Happy New Year and happy reading!

August Update: Writing, Writing, and More Writing

Yes, I know I said I was going to try and get posts out more frequently, and I know it’s mid-September and I’m just now talking about August, but honestly I’ve spent the last couple weeks trying to figure out what happened to August and what I actually did. It felt like August lasted forever, but at the same time it just slid on by in a haze of hot, stormy weather and a whole lot of writing.

I did get to spend a long weekend at home with my family, which was fun, even if I squeezed all my regular doctor and dentist appointments into that time. Sidenote, flying has become really stressful. I also had some fun hangouts with my writing group where we chatted and actually got writing done. A good friend from college is moving to the D.C. area in the next couple weeks, and I also got to visit with her when she came out to apartment hunt.

Otherwise, I mostly took Neutron for walks when it wasn’t too hot or pouring rain, and I wrote. I finished my latest draft of my book, and I wrote two short short stories and a poem in August, which is just crazy. I also definitely started feeling the urge to start drafting a new book, which makes sense because I’ve pretty much been revising my book-length projects since 2019. So I snuck in an outline for the project I want to work on for National Novel Writing Month this year. I’m so excited for this one I’m not sure I can wait until November to start though.

I mentioned this on the blog a few weeks ago, but just in case you missed it, my short story “Moon by Moon We Go Together” was also published in August in the Triangulation: Habitats anthology. You can get the anthology here, and you can read more about where the story came from right over here.

While I was really productive on the writing side in August, I feel like I’ve fallen into a bit of a reading slump. It’s been worse this month than it was in August, but I’ve been having a hard time picking up new books and getting into them, even if it’s something I’m really excited to read. Once I’m into the book, I’m fine, but then when I finish it will be a few days before I pick up something new, which isn’t how I’ve been reading for the last couple years. It might be because I’ve been listening to so much of the Writing Excuses podcast, because all those episodes are so short and digestible and I’m learning so much. It’s easy to say, “I’ll just listen to one more.” But I also think I’m just generally tired, and while I’ve read some books I’ve really enjoyed, most of what I’ve read in the last few months has only been okay. I’ve read so much in the last couple years, and I feel like I’m getting picky.

I only read five books in August. A couple, like Sourdough and Honey Girl, were really fun but didn’t quite come together for me for various reasons. I really enjoyed Zero G by Dan Wells, though it felt like the author was a bit didactic on the science of how gravity works on a spaceship, even for a middle grade book. I was also a huge fan of the third Mysterious Benedict Society book, The Mysterious Benedict Society and the Prisoner’s Dilemma. I love these children and all their crazy adventures! My one complaint on that is that it sort of feels like the kids have less and less agency with each book, but that’s a very minor complaint for me because I love all this so much. (Relatedly, I did finally finish the Mysterious Benedict Society show and it was great! Would definitely recommend.

My absolute favorite book of August, though, was The Calculating Stars by Mary Robinette Kowal. This is the first book in her Lady Astronaut series. The third book is nominated for a Hugo, as is the whole series, so I decided I better read them all. And between this and my love for For All Mankind, the show on Apple TV, I’ve realized I’m definitely a fan of alternate history/science fiction about the space race. The Calculating Stars is about a woman trying to open the astronaut program to women after a meteor strikes Earth in 1952. The impact will cause massive climate change, necessitating outer space colonies. And it is amazing! You should all go read it now!

And that’s it for August. Let me know what you’ve been up to, and if you’ve read any of the books I mention here, I’d love to discuss them.

How to Write a Blind Character, 2021 Edition

I’m going to the World Science Fiction and Fantasy Convention in December, so I’m trying to read all of the books on the Hugo ballot. So about a month ago, I read Black Sun by Rebecca Roanhorse. I did not like it for a number of reasons, but mostly because the way the blind character was portrayed, and really the way the entire premise of the book treats the blind character, was incredibly offensive to me. To be clear, I have seen other blind people on Twitter praising this book to the heavens, so obviously opinions vary, but I disagree with them. A lot. I’m a pretty forgiving reader but this book made me want to scream and throw things. I did in fact put together a very long Twitter thread, because I felt like no one was talking about these issues with the book and they needed to be discussed. If you want to read that, it’s right over here, but that isn’t what I want to talk about in this post. Today, I want to be a bit more constructive and provide some tips on how to write a blind character.

If you’re new to my site or somehow missed it, I’m blind. I was born with Aniridia Glaucoma, which means I don’t have any irises and my eye pressure isn’t normal. I used to have some vision in my right eye, but I had to have it removed almost eight years ago, so now I have no vision in my right eye. I often describe what I see on my right as a big black hole. I do still have some vision in my left eye. I can see light and dark and colors, but I can’t see details unless I’m very close. Often if I see something, I won’t be positive what I’m looking at until I’ve touched it, unless I already know what I’m looking at. I can read print, but generally it has to be really big, and I have to be really close, and even then I’m going letter by letter. Because I don’t have irises, my eyes can’t adjust, so I have a harder time seeing in particularly bright or particularly dark settings.

All of this is relevant, because the first thing you need to know about writing a blind character is that most people who identify as blind do have some vision. Any amount of vision is useful. For example I can read the time on my alarm clock or see the temperature setting on my oven. But how blind people use their vision will vary from person to person and situation to situation. And while any amount of vision is a useful tool we might use, it probably isn’t the first tool we draw on. It’s also important to explain that any amount of vision is vast to a blind person: there is a huge difference between being totally blind and having light perception, just as there is a huge difference between having light perception and having light perception and being able to see colors. So my first piece of advice is to do your research. There is tons of literature out there on blindness, particularly from blind people’s points of view. Read it. And don’t be afraid to seek out blind people and ask questions. If you’re polite and sincere in your goal to do this right, most of us are willing to talk to you.

Do your research not only on how much blind people can see but also on the tools and skills blind people use to be independent. We travel with white canes and guide dogs to get around, and we have years of training to learn to travel safely. Our canes and guide dogs are not props to be abandoned for the sake of the plot or the action sequence (looking at you, Daredevil). They are essential for our independence. Similarly, we use assistive technology, read Braille or large print, put tactile markers on our appliances, have systems for organizing and labeling our food and matching our clothing, and so on. In the past when I’ve had roommates, I’ve had a hard and fast rule that my roommates could absolutely not move my belongings, because otherwise I could never find them again (I have a whole story about searching for my apple slicer for two weeks because someone moved it without telling me). The same goes for moving furniture, especially in familiar environments when I might not be working with my guide dog. I’m describing all these things because so often, when I see blind characters, I don’t see this level of detail on not only how they use skills to adapt to their surroundings but also how they adapt their surroundings to help them.

A big thing I see a lot when people write blind characters is a blind character who has either some kind of magic or superpower or some really advanced technology that effectively negates their blindness. This is bad, because it isn’t true disability representation. Yes, blind people go out and do both ordinary and awesome things on a daily basis in real life, but we don’t do it in spite of our blindness. We do it with our blindness. We have skills and tools and technology that help, but we are still being blind. Our blindness has shaped who we are and how we relate to the world. If you have a blind character with a superpower or advanced technology that negates their blindness, then they aren’t blind.

I’m not saying you can’t write a blind character with cool technology or magic. You definitely can, and I argue you should. If sighted characters get magic, give it to the blind characters too. But you don’t want that magic to negate their disability. One way to do this is to use the details I was discussing above, the blindness skills and tools all blind people use in our daily lives. Another option is to place your blind character in situations where their magic or technology can’t help. Toph from Avatar the Last Airbender is an excellent example of this. You can also impose limitations on the technology or magic, which arguably you should be doing anyway just for good writing, so it’s clear to the reader just how the character is using it. For example, I’m working on a project with a blind character, and she has these wristbands that help her navigate and read print, but they don’t work if she’s going too fast, and she runs into trouble. Alternatively, you can give your character a power that isn’t helpful at all in terms of seeing things. Maybe they have magic that is specifically used in cooking, for example. They can’t use that to navigate the world.

So often, I see blind characters who are just stellar at being blind. Don’t do this. No matter how skilled a blind person is, there are still times when they struggle. Heck, I walk into walls in my own apartment if I’m not paying attention. I also want to note that everyone’s feelings on their vision are different, and they may also vary.

Blind people use words like “see,” “Look,” and “watch.” We enjoy movies and TV shows and sports. At least I’m told blind people enjoy sports. I never personally got that one, but that’s because i don’t like sports, not because I’m blind. Also, a lot of blind people prefer the word ‘blind” to other terms like “visually impaired,” “visually challenged,” or “a person who is blind.” But this will vary person to person. A blind woman once vehemently attempted to convince my younger brother that I should call myself “sightless.” Honestly, that baffles me and I don’t like that as a term, but that’s what she preferred.

Do not have your blind character touch other people’s faces to understand what they look like. First of all, no one does that in real life. It’s super weird and awkward. It also doesn’t actually give the blind person any useful information. They’re not going to think of someone they met as the person whose face felt like XYZ, even if they do the weird face feeling thing. They’re going to remember the sound of their voice.

The big takeaway here is blind people are people too. Your blind characters should also be people, as fully realized as any of your other characters. Their blindness is a crucial part of their identity, but it also isn’t the only part of their identity. Blind people have jobs and hobbies and interests. They date and fall in love and marry and break up. They have pets who aren’t guide dogs. They have kids. They have lives. I would love to see more stories of blind characters that don’t focus on their blindness but are instead about them living their lives and going on adventures and having agency with their blindness.s

A quick note on blocking: if you’re writing from the point of view of a blind character, be very careful, and pay close attention to how you write your descriptions. It’s hard, which isn’t to discourage you from trying it, but as writers we usually write descriptions with sight as the primary sense, and obviously you can’t do that with a character who’s blind. You have to use all your other senses and still make it clear to the reader what’s going on. I learned to write from reading, so I too use a lot of visual descriptions, so I’ve struggled with this too, and I’m blind.

Finally, pay attention to the role you are giving your blind character. As with any kind of representation, make sure they are not filling that role because they are blind. This is particularly important if you plan to write a villain who is blind. Blind people can absolutely do terrible things, but that isn’t because they’re blind. That’s because they’re people, and people can do terrible things. But be extremely careful not to imply that your blind villain is a villain because they are blind or that blindness is inherently evil. I shouldn’t need to say this, but apparently I do (see my Black Sun Twitter thread for details). Similarly, pay close attention to the message you are sending about blindness in your book. Individual people’s feelings may vary, but blindness is not something to be feared, it does not make a person helpless or evil, it does not give a person superhearing or any other enhanced senses, or any of the other stereotypes and misconceptions that are rampant in popular media.

I do not want to discourage anyone from writing a blind character. I do not subscribe to the belief that writers should only write within their experiences, because I believe writing outside our experiences is how we learn. But that is only true if you’re willing to put in the work to do it well and not cause harm with your story, which you can do so easily if you aren’t careful, even if you have the best intentions. Please, write blind characters. We need more stories about blind people. But please, please, please do your research. Hire sensitivity readers who are blind to review your project, pay them for their time, and listen to their advice. And please pay attention to what you are ultimately saying about blindness in your work. Remember that both writing and reading are ultimately acts of empathy, and how you portray blind people on the page will impact how people see blind people out in the real world. That’s a lot of power to have, so use it for good.

Reading, Writing, and Swimming in July

In my last blog post, I mentioned that I wanted to try something new, more of a general life update than just a roundup of all the books I read that month. The monthly reading roundup posts were starting to feel tedious to me, and I was struggling to have energy to post other things. My hope is these posts will be more fun for me, and you, going forward and that they will give me more energy to write other things for this blog. So let’s give it a shot!

July was a pretty good month. Yes it was a million degrees in D.C. all the time, but I was able to wait to take walks with Neutron at least until the sun went down. It wasn’t much cooler then, but at least we weren’t being baked alive. I did a lot of outdoor barre classes, which was fun, and at the end of the month, the studio opened up for indoor classes, mask optional if you’re vaccinated (and they check, which makes me very happy). I also finished rewatching all of the Tangled series in Italian, and I’ve so far really been enjoying the adaptation for The Mysterious Benedict Society.

In mid-July, my friends and I went up to New Jersey for a long weekend. It was meant to be a writing retreat, and some of us got writing done, but mostly it was hours of playing a travesty of volleyball, with a beach ball, in the pool. We christened our game “sport,” because we writerly types are so creative. It was a great weekend all around. I don’t think I’ve laughed so much in a really long time, and I went back to D.C. feeling much less stressed about the state of the world.

In other good news, one of my friends at this retreat had a cold (she tested negative for Covid, otherwise she wouldn’t have come), and I did not get sick. This was the first time I can definitively say I was exposed to germs since I found out I had lime disease at the start of the pandemic. Staying at home for a year and a half and wearing a mask whenever I go out has meant I haven’t been sick in all that time, which has been wonderful and such a welcome change from the constant illness I was dealing with all through my last year of law school, studying for the bar, and my first few months in D.C., but I had no idea if my lime had become chronic or if the antibiotics had worked. So this weekend I was away with my friends, I knew for sure I had been exposed to a cold, and I did not get sick. I am absolutely delighted, because I’m pretty sure this means the antibiotics worked and I don’t have chronic lime. I feel really lucky and so relieved.

I read fourteen books in July, bringing my total for the year up to 84 books. I finished the Princess Diaries series and for the most part really enjoyed the ending (though I wish we got to actually see the royal wedding). I also finished the Greystone Secrets trilogy by Margaret Peterson Haddix. I read the first two books last year and loved them, and I reread them this month before reading the third book. The third book, The Messengers, was a lot of fun, but honestly things got weird and it didn’t feel like it pulled the mysteries together for me. This month, I also discovered the Extraordinaries series by T. J. Klune and Illuminae by Amie Kaufman and Jay Kristoff. The Extraordinaries was a lot of fun, I absolutely adore the voice and the characters, and I can’t wait to find out what happens in the third book. But a major caveat for me is I’m really not sure how the subplot with Nick’s father, who is a cop, and the issue of police brutality, is handled in these books. It felt forced and shallow to me, and this made me uncomfortable. I’m hoping it comes to something in the third book. Illuminae was cool because it started out as a typical YA romance type thing, except in space, and then about a third of the way through you realize that is not what this book is at all, and it was great. But then at about the two thirds mark, the book did something that made me think there were only two possible endings, and I didn’t like either of them, so I stopped caring. The ending is something totally different and it’s really cool and I can’t wait for the sequel, but that last bit where I didn’t care really put a damper on how I feel about the book.

My favorite book of July was Amari and the Night Brothers by B. B. Alston. This book was absolutely amazing! It’s a middle grade book about a young black girl, Amari, who joins the bureau of supernatural affairs to try to find her missing older brother. She confronts bullies, entrance trials, and evil magicians and she is awesome! She also has an illegal talent making her life a whole lot harder. This book is heartwarming and beautiful and so so powerful, and I cannot wait for the sequel! In the meantime, you should all go read it right now!

Unfortunately, I had a least favorite book of July as well, Black Sun by Rebecca Roanhorse. I read this because it was on the Hugo ballot, and I did not like it at all. I normally try to find something good in every book I read, even if it turns out that it wasn’t the right story for me, but I just couldn’t here. Not only were there so many problems with the writing and the story, but I found the ablest tropes it employed to be incredibly harmful and just all around gross. I have so much more to say on this book, and it has inspired me to work on another post on how to write blind characters without perpetuating harmful stereotypes, which I will hopefully have ready for you all next week, so stay tuned.

In happier news, I discovered Brandon Sanderson’s 2020 writing lectures at BYU on YouTube and binged them all in a week. A lot of the lessons were things I already knew because I’ve been writing a long time myself, but I definitely picked up some useful nuggets and new ways of looking at things that I think will improve my writing. I have since been listening to all of the archives of the Writing Excuses podcast too and really enjoying it. I’m very late to the party on this podcast, obviously, but in case you’re like me and haven’t listened to Writing Excuses before, I recommend it. Each episode is only fifteen minutes long, so it’s very digestible and I’ve learned a lot.

I’ve also been super productive with my writing this month. I finished a draft of my fantasy mystery project, the memory wiping Academy novel I’ve mentioned on here before. My writing group has been reading the final chapter this week and they’re giving me feedback tomorrow. The book needs a lot of work still, but I think this draft is definitely the closest I’ve been to the story I’m trying to tell.

I’ve also been hard at work on some final revisions to the middle grade space adventure novel. I’ve been trying to add more emotion and voice for each of my point of view characters. At first it was kind of a counterintuitive revision for me, because I tend to take “show don’t tell” to an extreme when it comes to character reactions and feelings, but this isn’t the best approach for middle grade, and once I got into it and adjusted my mindset, it’s actually been a really fun revision.

Finally, four years ago when I was at Seeing Eye, I had a free course on writing flash fiction, and I got about halfway through it before training with Neutron became too consuming for me to consider. I had the beginnings of seven connected flash fiction pieces set in my Phoenix Song universe, and I had middles for most of them, but I never finished, and whenever I’ve sat down to work on the project over the years something hasn’t felt right about it. This month, I had the idea to put the flash pieces together into one short story, and it worked beautifully, though my ending may still need some work. It made me really happy to finish this story and have another Phoenix story completed. Hopefully I’ll be able to share it with you soon.

When I write it all out like that, July was quite a month! I hope you’ve all been keeping safe and having fun. What have you all been up to this summer?

June Reading Roundup

Happy July everyone. Summer has really hit, and we’re steaming away here in D.C. I was still really worried about what was going on with Neutron for the first half of the month, but then Seeing Eye came to work with me and we decided that at least right now we’re totally safe, which was a huge relief. Otherwise, it was a pretty chill month, except for the temperature of course. My writing group had a few in person gatherings, but we’re still doing our regular meetings remotely for the time being because the metro has some summer construction we’re trying to avoid.

In addition to reading, I finally finished watching the Tangled TV show on Disney Plus, and I just want to give it a shout-out because it’s adorable. Tangled is probably my favorite Disney movie, and the show was a great sequel. Also the music is very catchy. I also discovered in June that I can watch so many things on Disney Plus in Italian, and since I’ve been feeling like my Italian is rusty, I started rewatching the Tangled show in Italian. It was hard at first but ultimately really fun. Half my thoughts are in Italian now, which is just the way I like it.

Collage of the seven books I read in June: A Little Princess, The Bone Shard Daughter, The Mysterious Benedict Society, The Mysterious Benedict Society and the Perilous Journey, Princess Mia, Throne of Jade, and The City We BecameI read seven books in June, the same I read in May. It was almost all sci fi and fantasy books and then one classic. The classic was a standalone, I continued two series I’m in the middle of, started two other series, and one of the books I’m not sure if it’s meant to stand alone or be the start of the series. My writing group is going to Worldcon this year, since it’s in D.C., so I also started working my way through the books that have been nominated for Hugo Awards. I’ve already read some of them—Raybearer, Legendborn, and the Murderbot series at least. Harrow the Ninth is nominated for a Hugo, and since I haven’t read the first book in the series, Gideon the Ninth, I decided I should read that first. Honestly, I couldn’t get through it. I got about a third of the way through and still had no idea what was going on, and I ended up putting it down. As you know, I don’t put books down lightly. I think I can name all the books I’ve put down ever. There might only be three. A lot of my writing group is really insisting that I give Gideon another try, and maybe I will, but we’ll see.

I also want to throw it out there that I reread all the Nevermoor books again (this might be the fourth time this year), but this time I read them in Braille. It was a really interesting experience to see things like punctuation and spelling sentence structure that I didn’t necessarily notice when listening to the audiobooks. I am also super excited that we now appear to have a title and a synopsis for the fourth book, even though it won’t be coming out until the end of 2022. I realize I have gotten myself stuck in a loop of Nevermoor, but there are far worse loops to get stuck in, and it makes me happy, so I don’t care.

But now let’s chat about the new books that I finished in June.

First, I read A Little Princess by Frances Hodgson Burnett. This is set in England in the early 1900s, I think. Sarah is sent to boarding school, and when her beloved father dies leaving her nothing, the headmistress of the boarding school makes her become a servant and live in the attic and everything is awful. Frances Hodgson Burnett also wrote The Secret Garden, which I didn’t realize until after I finished this book, but there were several times throughout this book when I kept thinking “this reminds me of The Secret Garden.” In general, I enjoyed this book, hisoough it had that slower, very descriptive quality of older books that I’m not overly fond of. It also had an omniscient narration that told us some things that undercut the tension of the ending. But this was a nice little book, and if you haven’t read it, you might enjoy it.

Next, I read The Bone Shard Daughter by Andrea Stewart. This is the first book in the Drowning Empire series, and I think the next book is coming out later this year. The Bone Shard Daughter follows a whole bunch of characters living on this empire of floating islands. We have the emperor’s daughter who has lost most of her memories due to an illness and is trying to learn her father’s magic. There is the thief who is searching for his wife who was kidnapped years ago and is now getting roped into saving children from the yearly festivals that give magic to the emperor. There’s the daughter of the governor of one island whose girlfriend is involved in the rebellion. And there are people trapped in a mental fog working on a mysterious island. There is also a very creepy magic system that we discover over the course of the book. My one and only complaint, and it’s a very minor complaint, is that I felt like the emperor’s daughter was supposed to be the main character, especially because of the title, and she was actually the only character I had a hard time being engaged with for a while. But her story did hook me, and once it did, and everything started coming together, it was so great. I particularly loved how all these pieces and layers came together and this book just built and built and built to this great climax and finale. I can’t wait for the sequel.

Next, I read the first two books in Trenton Lee Stewart’s The Mysterious Benedict Society series: The Mysterious Benedict Society and The Mysterious Benedict Society and the Perilous Journey. The first book is about a group of unusual and talented children who are recruited to infiltrate a boarding school and foil the headmaster’s evil plan. And the second book sees the kids off on new and exciting adventures. These books were a ton of fun. I really enjoyed them, and I’m looking forward to getting the next one out of the library. I’m also currently watching the show that’s coming out on Disney and that’s been a lot of fun.

After that, I read the ninth Princess Diaries book, Princess Mia by Meg Cabot. I believe last month I complained that Mia hadn’t grown as a character much throughout the series so far, and that she was an absolute idiot in the last book. But this book saw Mia really having to deal with the consequences of her actions grow as a character and make some complicated decisions and I love it. It was certainly darker and more serious than the earlier books in the series, but at this point that’s what I needed.

Next, I read Throne of Jade by Naomi Novik, the second book in the Temeraire series. The Chinese want Temeraire back, because they believe only the emperial line can have celestial dragons. Temeraire refuses to be parted from Lawrence, so together they travel to China and political games begin to try and keep Temeraire with Lawrence (the British side) and to keep him in China (the Chinese side). It’s more complicated than that but there you go. I didn’t enjoy this quite as much as the first book. The pacing just felt very weird to me. Most of it was very slow, and then the last third or so was a roller coaster of action and political moves and countermoves and it really finished with a bang. That being said, I did enjoy it a lot, particularly the development of the bond between Lawrence and Temeraire, and I’m looking forward to getting my hands on the third book.

As I mentioned above, I’ve started working my way through the books nominated for Hugo awards this year. In June, I read The City We Became by N.K. Jemisin. This was actually my first ever Jemisin book, and I will definitely be checking out more of her work. Recommendations welcome. The City We Became is about how at a certain point cities become actually alive, are born into sentient, human being-type avatars of themselves, but the birth of New York goes wrong, and a bunch of very different people become the avatars for each of the burrows of New York and have to find each other and fight off the evil force that is trying to prevent the birth of New York. If the birth of New York fails, well pretty much New York is gone and a whole lot of stuff around it. What I really liked about this book was how it took a really weird concept and made it really accessible. I also loved the variety of characters we were dealing with. I was not totally thrilled about the ending. This is the book that I’m unclear if it’s meant to have a sequel or not. It’s one of those endings that if there’s more to come, I am totally fine with it. If this is it, it just wasn’t completely satisfying to me.

And that’s it for June. I’ve realized over the past few weeks that unfortunately I’m not enjoying writing these posts as much as I used to. I love talking about books, but these monthly posts about everything I’ve read are starting to feel kind of tedious for me. So starting next month, I’m going to try something a little different. Instead of talking about everything I’ve read each month, I’m going to give you more of a general update on what I’ve been up to with life and writing and then talk briefly about my absolute favorite books of the month. I’m hoping this will make the posts more exciting for me to write and give me some more energy and time to maybe put some other posts up here more frequently. So stay tuned for that. In the meantime, I hope you’re enjoying your summers and staying safe.